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March 13th, 2008 by bazza
1. Mum came home with the shopping.Mum came through the door with the green environmental bags crushing her little hands. “Is someone going to help me!” “no” muttered Jason. “I’m watching T.V”
2. Grandma’s house was old.Grandma’s house looked like a tumbled down old shack ready to fall down. As I walked through the hallway looking at all the old photo’s before the construction boy’s pulled her down. On the floor was a photo of her and Grandpa when the house was first built. I’ll keep this for the memories and recollections.
3. We were really sad when our old dog tip died.“Where‘d tip go mummy?” “His gone to doggy heaven.” “Will I ever see him again?’’ said my little sister bawling her eyes out. “You might” “I miss him already.”
4. the classroom was noisy” It was like mayhem” mum said at the kitchen table. They wouldn’t stop!” “ The yelling and screaming” “It was nothing like you thought” you got to put some discipline on them!”
5. It was a really hot day“ Mum, can we go to the pool” “It’s not hot enough” “ how hot do you need it to be!” “We have no shade, air conditioner or icy water.” “Ok get dressed I’ll be 5 minutes.” The 5 minutes seemed to go like hour’s until lets go!
6. It was Christmas Eve and everyone was up the street doing there last minute shopping. “Looks like everyone’s got the same idea” Dad said. We’ve just go to get a block of chocolate and were out of here. The street was packet and we couldn’t get in or out of the shops. There was only seconds left til the shops closed and then a man came over the P.A system the shops are closed.
7. There was a little girl in Target looking for something or someone. “Are you ok?” I said “ I can’t find my mummy” she sobbed. I lead her up to the counter so they could call her mum up. After 5 minutes she came up to the counter.
8. the crowd was screaming at the band. Every year we come here to port fairy to listen to the music but this year we had the best sets ever!!
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